Sela Locke

Time for a new review! Yay! -loves this story- pixie haircut, spiking out in all directions, it was black at the roots and purple at the ends I don't mind ...

I'd like to say it was original, but it really wasn't. It's pretty much the same Bella - Edward thing, except the names are changed, and the punctuation isn't right. ...

"The Passion of the PSHHHH-what?" My gosh, Nu. Problems much? Yes, yes. I like the characters, and all that jazz and I'm totally stoked for the second chapp, but you ...

Mae, you rock so hard it's creepy. I think Cher pretty much just laid it out, and really the only thing I saw was, well, my impression of the way ...

Short. Anyhow, yes. This was, in the beginning, a swerve away from the happy little love stories. However, now it, too, has become cliche. Car crash? The guy's dead? Yeah, ...

I don't say this about a lot of stories, but this was great! The conflict, the characters (if a bit cliche) were well-done, and very vivid. It's refreshing to find ...

Well, well, well. Another TwiFanfic. Now, I'm going to try and not be biased, because if there's one book I dislike above all else, or one author, it would be ...

I'm not one for nitpicking, so I won't, but... Like a ton of stories these days, this is ridiculously fast-paced. Everyone seems to be bi-polar, and none of them seem ...

Well, first off, this was really, really unrealistic. I mean, what kind of woman drives along the freeway looking for lonely hitchhikers, then when she finds one, practically forces them ...

Procrastinator, I think you mean. "Ah, the winds of the May... or is it the tides of May? No, I think that was a song by Journey..." Yes, I just ...

Oh my, this was great! I was completely frozen, just staring at the screen. You made it so real! And it was amazing how they saved each other, and never ...

Huh, strange and, well, interesting. You need to work on making it a little more informative. You described Harvey, but I didn't find out what Sasha looks like. I don't ...

Nitpicking really isn't my thing, so I won't do any. Anyhow, this story is definitely going to take some work. My biggest peeves? Well, for one, this is another one ...

Unless this story was placed somewhere in the, I don't know, fifteen hundreds, I suggest you throw out pretty much all of the dialogue. Normal teens don't say things like... ...

Okay, I'm not going to nitpick. Most of this was pretty good, considering the cliche of Leo's looks. The plotline is exciting, and certainly got me excited as she raced ...